Today's class

2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi It's already Wednesday! Thank you for your today's teaching. Let's cheer up for weekends. Here is my diary. I outlined what we had in today's class. I keep dogs and grow some plants. first of all, as for dogs' benefit, challenge, they make not me but also my family members happy and make my house lively. but they make some mass. If I should say it's the challenge. but as for plant they make my house's air clean from the dog's fur, smell. but It's really difficult to handle especially in winter. I should have prepared for this class yesterday. but I'm too tried after work. I usually go to my home at about midnight. so I prepare for the class every morning. Thank you for your service. Take care~

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! I appreciate your effort in preparing for our class. I understand you were tired when you answered my call, but you still nailed all the questions and I am happy with your performance. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Hi It\'s already Wednesday!>> Correct Thank you for your today\'s teaching.>> Thank you for teaching me today.  Let\'s cheer up for weekends.>> Correct Here is my diary.>> Correct I outlined what we had in today\'s class.>> I made an outline of what we had in our class today. I keep dogs and grow some plants.>> Correct first of all, as for dogs\' benefit, challenge, they make not me but also my family members happy and make my house lively.>> First of all, the benefit of raising dogs is they make not only me but also my family members happy and our house lively.  but they make some mass. >> However, they make some mess.  If I should say it\'s the challenge.>> I should say that is the challenge. but as for plant they make my house\'s air clean from the dog\'s fur, smell.>> As for plants, they make the air in our house clean despite having some dog\'s fur and smell.  but It\'s really difficult to handle especially in winter.>> However, it\'s really difficult to handle them especially in winter. I should have prepared for this class yesterday.>> Correct but I\'m too tired after work. >> Correct I usually go to my home at about midnight.>> Correct so I prepare for the class every morning.>> Correct Thank you for your service.>> Correct Take care~ >> Correct  

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