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Usually the storm come to Korea in June or July and we call it as the typhoon. When it is approached, we have wind gusts and heavy rains. Natural disaster of Korea are typhoons, storm surges, heavy rains, heavy snows, heat waves and so on. Actually I worked about vulnerability assessments of natural disasters and I wrote my master’s thesis associated with heat waves. So I have thought a lot of it and I think the most important thing is providing against disasters such as warning, education, shelters. If it is happened in Korea, I will send some money to help sufferers. But if huge disasters occur here such as Japan last year, I will go there and I'd like to do relief works.

Nice job! Thank you for trusting me these compositions you make. It really feels good to be trusted and appreciated as well in my teaching. Anyway, I hope this helps. If you have any queries about it, please feel free to ask me in our class. Have a great day!^^ ~ Teacher Alice ~ Usually the storm come to Korea in June or July and we call it as the typhoon. >> Usually storms in Korea happen in June or July and we call it as typhoon.When it is approaches, we have wind gusts and heavy rains. >> When it approaches, we have wind gusts and heavy rains.Natural disaster of Korea are typhoons, storm surges, heavy rains, heavy snows, heat waves and so on. >> Natural disasters in Korea are typhoons, storm surges, heavy rains, heavy snows, heat waves and so on. Actually I worked about vulnerability assessments of natural disasters and I wrote my master’s thesis associated with heat waves. >> Actually I worked for vulnerability assessments of natural disasters and wrote my thesis in my masters associated with heat waves.So I have thought a lot of it and I think the most important thing is providing against disasters such as warning, education, shelters. >> So I have thought a lot about it and I think the most important thing is to provide information and help against disasters such as warning, education and shelters.If it is happened in Korea, I will send some money to help sufferers. >> If this will happen in Korea, I will send some money to help the people.But if huge disasters occur here such as Japan last year, I will go there and I\'d like to do relief works. >> But if huge disasters occur here like what happened to Japan last year, I will go there to help and give some relief goods.