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2011-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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The weather in Korea has been chilly for weeks. I think it's even coler than China these days. I liked winter season, especially snow, but these days it's too cold to go outside. I usually stayed home and I feel like my muscle is weaking. And I slept so much yesterday. I even feel like I'm still sleeping. I need to control myself and take care of myself.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], It’s great to know that you like winter. I bet you’re having a lot of fun but I have to agree that you need to take care of yourself also. -T. Bianca The weather in Korea has been chilly for weeks. >>Correct. I think it's even coler than China these days. >>I think it’s even cooler than China these days.I liked winter season, especially snow, but these days it's too cold to go outside. >>I like the winter season. I especially like the snow but these days it’s too cold to go outside. I usually stayed home and I feel like my muscle is weaking. >>I usually stay at home and feel like my muscles are weakening. And I slept so much yesterday. >>So I slept a lot yesterday.  I even feel like I'm still sleeping. >>I still feel like I’m still sleeping.  I need to control myself and take care of myself. >>Correct.

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