today's composition

Hi, Bianca It's been a one week since we met. Your voice is so sweet and friendly. Speaking English with you on the phone is very helpful more than I expected. I'm a law school student and it's my first winter vacation in law school. So I have room for studying English. I've lived in Korea all my life but I wanna be an international lawyer someday! ^-^ I didn't have any experience of going abroad to study. However, my homepage in my laptop is CNN's homepage and I try to watch videos and read articles when I have time. I really appreciate you. I could learn useful expressions like "building block", "pamper yourself", "nearest confidant" or "pencil skirt"! Ha Ha ^-^

Hi [이름]!     I must say very good. In this compostion, there are few corrections which has something to do with a few words. I’m so glad that you find it very helpful speaking English with me. I’m sure that if you work harder, you can reach your goal of becoming an international lawyer one day. -T. Bianca   Hi, Bianca >>Hi Bianca,It's been a one week since we met. >>Correct. Your voice is so sweet and friendly. >>Correct. Speaking English with you on the phone is very helpful more than I expected. >>CorrectI'm a law school student and it's my first winter vacation in law school. >>Correct So I have room for studying English. >>Correct  I've lived in Korea all my life but I wanna be an international lawyer someday! ^-^ >>I’ve lived in Korea all my life but I want to be an international lawyer someday. (Although it is correct, “wanna” is a slang word. It is not accepted in compositions.)  I didn't have any experience of going abroad to study. >>I don’t have any experiences of going abroad to study. However, my homepage in my laptop is CNN's homepage and I try to watch videos and read articles when I have time. >>However, my hompage in my laptop is CNN’s homepage and I try to watch videos and read articles whenever I have the time.I really appreciate you. >>Correct.  I could learn useful expressions like "building block", "pamper yourself", "nearest confidant" or "pencil skirt"! Ha Ha ^-^>>I have learned useful expressions like...