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I've been watching the news of Egypt these days. At the first time, I had little interest in their demonstration. However, after watching some motion pictures, I've had more interest. I could see that the government car didn't slow down speed. Some people were hit by the car. Nobody knew whether they were killed or not. I was too sad and I thought of sufferings they were facing. It made me think of the history of democratization in Korea.

I feel so sorry for them, too. I hope everything will be fine very soon.

Have a great night. See you again tomorrow.

---joanna---

I've been watching the news of Egypt these days.

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At the first time, I had little interest in their demonstration.

>> Correct

OR:

>> At first, I’m not much interested about their demonstration.

However, after watching some motion pictures, I've had more interest.

>> However, after watching some motion pictures, it caught more of my interest.

I could see that the government car didn't slow down speed.

>> I could see that the government cars didn’t slow down their speed.

Some people were hit by the car.

>> Correct

Nobody knew whether they were killed or not.

>> Correct

I was too sad and I thought of sufferings they were facing.

>> Correct

It made me think of the history of democratization in Korea.  

>> Correct

OR>> I remembered the Korean history about democratization.