Today's compositon
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, What makes 'a house' into 'a home'?
I think this sentense is uonsense.
The correct answer is 'us'! Because 'a home' needs character U and S to make to 'a house'.
강사 첨삭
What a splendid day it is again! I\'m happy to read your answer to your homework. Good job! But the question was, \"How can you make a house to a home?\" Here\'s my opinion about that. A house is simply a building. But if there\'s a family who loves each other and who cares for one another, then their house could be called \"a home\". Home refers to a place where affection is centered. I hope you have a happy home, Mr. [Name]!
Continue sharing your opinions about several different topics so you\'d eventually be able to spontaneously express yourself in the future. Do take note of some of my suggestions. I\'ll talk to you later!
Teacher Alice
Well, What makes \'a house\' into \'a home\'?
>>Well, what makes \'a house\' into \'a home\'? (Don\'t capitalize the word \'what\' since it\'s in the middle of the sentence.)I think this sentense is uonsense.
>>I think this sentence is nonsense.
>>I think this sentences doesn\'t make sense.
>>I think this statement is absurd.The correct answer is \'us\'!
>>Correct!
Because \'a home\' needs character U and S to make to \'a house\'.
>>Because \'a home\' needs the characters U and S to make \'a house\'.
OR;
>>Because \'a home\' needs people who love and care for each other.
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