today's diary
학생이 쓴 원문
2012year feburary 10th friday and weather is cold
today is jeon ju mansu - elementry school's graduation
iwent mansu elementry school but today is last class ㅠㅠ
today my mom came to mansu elementry school because i had gradulation
and i song graduation's song with my friends
my mom said "congratulation" and gave bunch of flowers
when class was finishing i was very happy because i am middle school
student but i was sad too beacuse i leave mansu elementry school, my
teacher and my friend .
강사 첨삭
Congratulation My dear Peter!
I\'m so happy for you! I know what it felt about leaving our friends and teachers, but it\'s part of growing up. You have to leave to be successful and to grow. Just try to continue communicating with your teachers and friends so that you won\'t miss that much.Anyway, thank you for sharing you diary to me. I wish to read more from you!
See you soon!
T.Sheela
2012year feburary 10th friday and weather is cold >>The 10th of year 2012, the weather is cold.today is jeon ju mansu - elementry school\'s graduation
>>Today is JeonJu Manso Elementary school\'s graduation.iwent mansu elementry school but today is last class ㅠㅠ
>> I went to Mansu Elementary School but today is our last class.today my mom came to mansu elementry school because i had gradulation and i song graduation\'s song with my friends
>>Today my mom came to Mansu Elementary School because it was my graduation and I sang our graduation song with my friends.my mom said \"congratulation\" and gave bunch of flowers
>>My mom said,\"Congratulation\" and gave me a bunch of flowers.when class was finishing i was very happy because i am middle school student
>>When our class was finished, I was very happy because I will be a middle school student.
but i was sad too beacuse i leave mansu elementry school, my teacher and my friend .
>> But I was so sad too because I will leave Mansu Elementary School, my Teacher and my friends.
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