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2012-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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2012/march 19th monday i have a cold i am very sick now yesterday i havn't sleep because i have fever so i'm tired i ate medicines but i'm untill sick today went to school iam a math leader i should hellow to teacher but i'm very sick so i told to my friend "please, say [이름][이름] is sick to teacher" and my friend told to teacher so teacher said "oh [이름][이름] all you ok? , i think you will better to go hospital" so i said "it's ok" in science class sience teacher said "[이름] [이름] i think you are sick" so i said "why?" and teacher said "your feel is not good" so everybody hope i will go to hospital but hospital is scary so i bought cold medician and ate few minutes ago i wish cold is go away from my body

강사 첨삭

Hi Peter, Oh...  You need to take more rest today so you will feel more better tomorrow.Eat more fruits like oranges, bananas, apples, and many more to help you boost your immune system.See you smart Boy!!! T.Sheela 2012/march 19th monday >> Today is the 19th of March 2012 and It\'s Monday.i have a cold >>I have a cold.i am very sick now yesterday i havn\'t sleep because i have fever >>I am very sick since yesterday, I have not had a sleept because I had a fever.so i\'m tired >>That is why I am tired.i ate medicines but i\'m untill sick >> I ate some medicines but still I\'m sick. today went to school iam a math leader i should hellow to teacher but i\'m very sick soi told to my friend \"please, say [이름][이름] is sick to teacher\" and my friend told to teacher so teacher said \"oh [이름][이름] all you ok? , i think you will better to go hospital\" so i said \"it\'s ok\" >>Today I went to school. Since I am a Math Leader, I should say hello to my teacher but since I am very sick. So I told my friend to tell our teacher that I was sick. My friend told the teacher that I was sick so the teacher said,\" Oh [이름][이름], Are you okay? I think you better go to the hospital\" but I said,\" It\'s okay\".in science class sience teacher said \"[이름] [이름] i think you are sick\" so i said \"why?\"and teacher said \"your feel is not good\" >>In my Science class. Our science teacher said,\" [이름] [이름], I think you are sick?\" I asked her,\"Why did you say that?\" and our teacher replied,\" You don\'t look good\".so everybody hope i will go to hospital but hospital is scary >>Everyone want\'s me to go to the hospital but hospital is scary.so i bought cold medician and ate few minutes ago >>So I bought cold medicines and ate some few minutes ago.i wish cold is go away from my body >>I wish this cold will go away.

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