Today's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today Weather is sunny day. I'm feeling that My mind is silent When I saw a windows in front of my desk.
oh my got. That time is over. I have to work. Jimmy See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr.Jimmy I'm very happy that you have time to wrote down on our site. Here you can see if your grammar is progressing. We will be talking about seokga tansinil for today's lesson, you will do all the talking and I will just listen on your explanations. Have a great weekend!I'll call you on Monday!
LINA
Today Weather is sunny day.
>>Today’s weather is sunny.
I'm feeling that My mind is silent
>>I feel that my mind is at peace.
When I saw a windows in front of my desk.
>>When I look at my window in front of my desk.oh my got.
>>Oh my God!
That time is over.
>>The time is over.
I have to work.
>>Correct
Jimmy See you tomorrow.
>> Jimmy will see you tomorrow.
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