TODAY'S DIARY

2013-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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I work fivedays a week. and I get in at 9 a.m and go home at 6 p.m. I work overtime once or twice a week. I make beeline for home after work. I am worn out after a hard day's work. I am cheating an English example diary. HAHAHA.. Because I don't know English well. I'm going to try for English study.

강사 첨삭

HELLO THERE MS.[이름]!^^ Thank you for sending your first ever diary to me. I really aprreciate it. Don\'t be shy in expressing your thoughts in our class. Mistakes will be helpful for you. Don\'t worry because I\'ll do my best to help you out with Englsih. Please go over my corrections below. See you in class tomorrow. Teacher Rowena   I work fivedays a week. >> correct // I work five days a week.//and I get in at 9 a.m and go home at 6 p.m. >>And I start work at 9 am until 6 pm. >> OR I start work at 9 am ang go home at 6pm.I work overtime once or twice a week. >>correct!I make beeline for home after work. >>I make a beeline for home after work.I am worn out after a hard day\'s work.>>correct!I am cheating an English example diary. HAHAHA.. >>I cheated the examples I gave in my diary. ( that\'s ok,it\'s just a start ^^)Because I don\'t know English well.>>correct! I\'m going to try for English study. >> I\'m going to try studying English.

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