today's diary

I woke up 10 am . I went to the library to study for 7hours. It’s crazy… I took an online lecture sori dream. I want to eat Korean food by using the utensil and I have already ingredient to make Korean foods ! but I am afraid I could cook very well when I will hang out with friend ! .. please god… make me became a chef when I will cook for my buddy !! I was going to go to international house , but I didn’t go because originally my Korean friend came along with me. But he didn’t answer to me that’s why I didn’t go . And I have first class phone English. At the first I was nervous before start, but I became a outgoing person like a crazy man !! Today is the always same as other day. But I want to get a good English skill for my dream.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending in your composition here. I made some corrections with your sentences below. Please review them. Sweet dreams! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I woke up 10 am . >> I woke up at 10 AM. I went to the library to study for 7 hours. >> CORRECT! It’s crazy… >> CORRECT! I took an online lecture sori dream. >> I took an online lecture. *I don\'t know exactly what you mean by \"sori dream\" here. ^^ I want to eat Korean food by using the utensil and I have already ingredient to make Korean foods ! >> I want to eat Korean food using chopsticks. I already have some ingredients to make Korean food. but I am afraid I could cook very well when I will hang out with friend ! .. >> But I\'m afraid that I cannot cook very well for my friends. please god… >> CORRECT! make me became a chef when I will cook for my buddy !! >> Help me become a chef so that I can cook for my buddies.I was going to go to international house , but I didn’t go because originally my Korean friend came along with me. >> I was supposed to go to an international dormitory with my Korean friend. But he didn’t answer to me that’s why I didn’t go . >> But he didn\'t give me his reply so I didn\'t go there.And I have first class phone English. >> I had my first phone English class today. At the first I was nervous before start, but I became a outgoing person like a crazy man !! >> At first, I was nervous, but then I became outgoing and I talked a lot like a crazy man.Today is the always same as other day. >> Today is the same as the other days. But I want to get a good English skill for my dream. >> My dream is to improve my English skills.