Today\'s essay(3/16)
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If I have to wait until I can talk with the receiver, I\'m willing to wait him or her.
In my experience, I have never talked on the phone at once with the staffs who work in the customer service.
The best way to contact them is waiting.
If they put my call on hold for 3 minutes, it maybe takes 5 minutes or longer.
Nevertheless, Waiting for him is the fastest way to contact him than you leave the message or your contact number.
Department of customer service is busy because there are many request from their customers.
So I can understand that I couldn\'t contact immediately.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine,
That was real quick! You are an awesome student; you did your homework fast:) Thanks for your diligence and enthusiasm.
-Rachel
If I have to wait until I can talk with the receiver, I\'m willing to wait him or her.
>> correct (speaking)
>> If I have to wait until I can talk with the receiver that would help me resolve my issue, I\'m willing to wait for him or her.
In my experience, I have never talked on the phone at once with the staffs who work in the customer service.
In my experience, I have never talked on the phone at once with the staffs who work in the customer service.
>> correct
The best way to contact them is waiting.
The best way to contact them is waiting.
>> correct
>> The best way to talk to them is through waiting.
If they put my call on hold for 3 minutes, it maybe takes 5 minutes or longer.
If they put my call on hold for 3 minutes, it maybe takes 5 minutes or longer.
>> If they put my call on hold for 3 minutes, it might take 5 minutes or even longer.
Nevertheless, Waiting for him is the fastest way to contact him than you leave the message or your contact number.
Nevertheless, Waiting for him is the fastest way to contact him than you leave the message or your contact number.
>> Nevertheless, waiting is the fastest way to talk to them than leaving a message or your contact number hoping that they would call back.
Department of customer service is busy because there are many request from their customers.
Department of customer service is busy because there are many request from their customers.
>> The customer service department is busy because there are many requests and issues from their customers.
So I can understand that I couldn\'t contact immediately.
So I can understand that I couldn\'t contact immediately.
>> So I can understand if I couldn\'t communicate with them immediately.
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