Today\'s essay(3/17)
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I don\'t have enough experience in that situation. I think my customers are very nice :-)
But there are many cases about the staffs working at customer service department suffered from a customer who gets annoyed.
In my opinion, they seem to get annoyed easily when they felt ignored from the staff.
To prevent this situation, the staffs have to listen to their requests first not stop them talking.
Even if the staff already know what they want or what they say, Listening is very important.
And Especially, Stop them talking is the worst way to communicate with customer or other people.
I also had a bad habit such as interrupting but I\'m trying to fix it.
Anyway, Listening is the key point to communicate with a customer who is old and get annoyed easily.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine,
You truly are a diligent student! Again, this is a quick response. You are awesome:)
-Rachel
Actually I don\'t have enough experience in that situation. I think my customers are very nice :-)
>> correct (awesome)
But there are many cases about the staffs working at customer service department suffered from a customer who gets annoyed.
But there are many cases about the staffs working at customer service department suffered from a customer who gets annoyed.
>> But there are many cases of customer service providers suffering from irate customers.
In my opinion, they seem to get annoyed easily when they felt ignored from the staff.
In my opinion, they seem to get annoyed easily when they felt ignored from the staff.
>> correct
To prevent this situation, the staffs have to listen to their requests first not stop them talking.
To prevent this situation, the staffs have to listen to their requests first not stop them talking.
>> To prevent this situation from happening, the staffs have to listen to their requests or complaints without interfering.
Even if the staff already know what they want or what they say, Listening is very important.
Even if the staff already know what they want or what they say, Listening is very important.
>> correct
And Especially, Stop them talking is the worst way to communicate with customer or other people.
And Especially, Stop them talking is the worst way to communicate with customer or other people.
>> And especially, stopping them while talking is the worst way to communicate with customers or other people.
I also had a bad habit such as interrupting but I\'m trying to fix it.
I also had a bad habit such as interrupting but I\'m trying to fix it.
>> I also had this bad habit but I am fixing it,
Anyway, Listening is the key point to communicate with a customer who is old and get annoyed easily.
Anyway, Listening is the key point to communicate with a customer who is old and get annoyed easily.
>> Anyway, listening is the key point in communicating with an old customer who gets easily annoyed.
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