Today\'s essay(3/20)
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If my junior colleague doesn\'t understand my instructions, I will explain again what I ask for.
To work efficiently, communication is very important.
It might takes much time to fix it if he or she worked as they didn\'t understand clarify.
It is inefficient and causes work overtime.
So, I think it\'s bad result for both.
When I instruct something to work to my junior colleague, I always tell them to talk me if they have something which can\'t understand clarify.
I\'ve also experienced these problems with my boss back in the day.
First of all, I think that instructing clarify is important skill when my career is went up.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine,
That was real quick! Thanks for always showing diligence in class and in doing your homework:) Your answers are truly interesting!
-Rachel
If my junior colleague doesn\'t understand my instructions, I will explain again what I ask for. To work efficiently, communication is very important.
>> correct
It might takes much time to fix it if he or she worked as they didn\'t understand clarify.
It might takes much time to fix it if he or she worked as they didn\'t understand clarify.
>> It might take much time and effort if she/he did the work without understanding what should be done.
It is inefficient and causes work overtime. So, I think it\'s bad result for both.
It is inefficient and causes work overtime. So, I think it\'s bad result for both.
>> correct
When I instruct something to work to my junior colleague, I always tell them to talk me if they have something which can\'t understand clarify.
When I instruct something to work to my junior colleague, I always tell them to talk me if they have something which can\'t understand clarify.
>> When I instruct my junior colleagues to do something, I always tell them to ask me or clarify matters that they didn\'t understand.
I\'ve also experienced these problems with my boss back in the day.
I\'ve also experienced these problems with my boss back in the day.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
First of all, I think that instructing clarify is important skill when my career is went up.
First of all, I think that instructing clarify is important skill when my career is went up.
>> Most of all, I think that clarifying instructions is important when I get promoted.
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