Today\'s essay(3/23)
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Experience as a intern in a reputable company has a lot of benefits.
First, you can learn easily how to work in a company.
Generally, reputable companies are well equipped their system and process for work.
So I think you can just learn the work without wasting your time for underwork.
Second, this experience is help to get a job formally.
Many companies give extra points to applicants who have an experience as a intern.
If you worked in a reputable company, you could get more extra points than other people.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine,
That was quick! Thanks as always for sharing your wonderful ideas through this written homework:)
-Rachel
Experience as a intern in a reputable company has a lot of benefits.
>> Experiencing internship in a reputable company has a lot of benefits.
>> Being an intern in a reputable company has a lot of benefits.
First, you can learn easily how to work in a company.
>> correct
Generally, reputable companies are well equipped their system and process for work.
>> Generally, reputable companies have a well equipped system and an effective work process.
So I think you can just learn the work without wasting your time for underwork.
>> correct
>> OR: So, I think you can learn the work efficiently.
Second, this experience is help to get a job formally.
>> Second, this experience is helpful or beneficial in acquiring a formal job.
Many companies give extra points to applicants who have an experience as a intern.
If you worked in a reputable company, you could get more extra points than other people.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
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