Today\'s essay(3/25)
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I would rather give an honest but harsh feedback although the person hurts his feelings.
People have defects in terms of their acting or their habits.
Some people who already know thier wrong behaving are trying to fix their disadvantage.
But, the others don\'t know if they act wrong habits.
So, someone like friends, family and colleagues should tell him to fix it.
The one thing you have to notice, you say good feedback first, and then tell them to honest feedback.
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-Rachel
I would rather give an honest but harsh feedback although the person hurts his feelings.
>> I would rather give an honest but harsh feedback although the person receiving it might get or feel hurt.
People have defects in terms of their acting or their habits.
People have defects in terms of their acting or their habits.
>> correct
Some people who already know their wrong behaving are trying to fix their disadvantage.
Some people who already know their wrong behaving are trying to fix their disadvantage.
>> Some people who already know their wrong behavior try to fix their flaws.
But, the others don\'t know if they act wrong habits.
But, the others don\'t know if they act wrong habits.
>> correct
>> OR: But the others don\'t know if they are acting or behaving wrongly.
So, someone like friends, family and colleagues should tell him to fix it.
So, someone like friends, family and colleagues should tell him to fix it.
>> correct
The one thing you have to notice, you say good feedback first, and then tell them to honest feedback.
The one thing you have to notice, you say good feedback first, and then tell them to honest feedback.
>> correct
>> OR: The one thing you should take note though is to provide a good feedback then proceed to the honest one.
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