Today\'s essay(3/26)
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I haven\'t been chosen to represent my company in an international setting yet.
However, if I were chosen I should have a big responsibility.
People could judge the company\'s reputation by my speech and behavior in international ceremony.
So, I have to keep the attitude which kind and gentle.
If I had a chance to represent my company, I feel nervous but it makes me excite.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine!
Your second homework for today:)
-Rachel
I haven\'t been chosen to represent my company in an international setting yet. However, if I were chosen I should have a big responsibility.
>> correct
People could judge the company\'s reputation by my speech and behavior in international ceremony.
People could judge the company\'s reputation by my speech and behavior in international ceremony.
>> correct (awesome)
So, I have to keep the attitude which kind and gentle.
So, I have to keep the attitude which kind and gentle.
>> So I have to keep a kind and gentle attitude.
If I had a chance to represent my company, I feel nervous but it makes me excite.
If I had a chance to represent my company, I feel nervous but it makes me excite.
>> If I had a chance to represent my company, I would feel nervous but excited at the same time.
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