Today\'s essay(3/27)
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If I go to a popular restaurant, I\'m going to order everthing that I want to eat at first.
I don\'t want to follow my order up because it takes long time to be served in popular restaurant.
If everything that I want to have is already ordered, I don\'t need to wait the foods.
Foods are served in order, I just eat as food is served.
So I recommend that you have to order everything in first order.
강사 첨삭
Hi Catherine,
You are on a roll today! I guess you had fun doing your homework one after another. ^ ^
-Rachel
If I go to a popular restaurant, I\'m going to order everything that I want to eat at first.
>> correct
I don\'t want to follow my order up because it takes long time to be served in popular restaurant.
I don\'t want to follow my order up because it takes long time to be served in popular restaurant.
>> correct
If everything that I want to have is already ordered, I don\'t need to wait the foods.
If everything that I want to have is already ordered, I don\'t need to wait the foods.
>> correct (just add for before the foods- wait for the foods)
Foods are served in order, I just eat as food is served.
So I recommend that you have to order everything in order first.
Foods are served in order, I just eat as food is served.
So I recommend that you have to order everything in order first.
>> correct
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