Today\'s essay(3/30)
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If I have a chance to give a speech instead of my boss, it makes me little nervous.
If I don\'t know deeply the contents about speech\'s topic, I have to spend my time to prepare for giving a speech.
In my company, our job is separated personally so I haven\'t had a chance to report on behalf of other person.
My boss has to be responsible to gather team\'s weekly issues.
So, if I do instead of him I should prepare a lot of things for understanding team\'s issues respectively.
강사 첨삭
Oh, here\'s another one! Wow, you are very diligent in doing your homework, and that is much commendable!
-Rachel
If I have a chance to give a speech instead of my boss, it makes me little nervous.
>> correct
If I don\'t know deeply the contents about speech\'s topic, I have to spend my time to prepare for giving a speech.
If I don\'t know deeply the contents about speech\'s topic, I have to spend my time to prepare for giving a speech.
>> correct
>> If I am not well versed about the topic, I have to spend time preparing for the speech.
In my company, our job is separated personally so I haven\'t had a chance to report on behalf of another person.
In my company, our job is separated personally so I haven\'t had a chance to report on behalf of another person.
>> correct (we just use another with person instead of other, but we say other people)
My boss has to be responsible to gather team\'s weekly issues.
My boss has to be responsible to gather team\'s weekly issues.
>> My boss is responsible in gathering the team\'s weekly issues.
So, if I do instead of him I should prepare a lot of things for understanding team\'s issues respectively.
So, if I do instead of him I should prepare a lot of things for understanding team\'s issues respectively.
>> correct
>> So, I do it instead of him; I should prepare a lot of things to understand the team\'s issues respectively.
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