Today\'s essay(3/6)

2020-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer to take my time in a hurry in weekday. In weekday, There are a lot of things to do for me. First, I have to work from 9 to 6. I\'m really busy in working time except for lunch break because of a lot of meetings. Second, I used to study English after work. English is very important to communicate with my global co-workers. And finally I have to exercise for lose weight before I go to bed. This is my routine in weekday. Being busy makes me feel alive. I do nothing and take a rest on weekend as a reward. For these reasons, I prefer to live busily ONLY weekday. :-)

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [Name]. Thanks for doing your homework.~! Keep it up~!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I prefer to take my time in a hurry in weekday.
>>> I prefer to take time in a hurry on weekdays.
In weekday, There are a lot of things to do for me.
>>> On weekdays, there are a lot of things that I have to do.
First, I have to work from 9 to 6.
>>> CORRECT
I\'m really busy in working time except for lunch break because of a lot of meetings.
>>> I\'m really busy during working hours because of a lot of meetings except for lunch break .
Second, I used to study English after work.
>>> CORRECT
English is very important to communicate with my global co-workers.
>>> CORRECT
And finally I have to exercise for lose weight before I go to bed.
>>> And finally, I have to exercise to lose weight before I go to bed.
This is my routine in weekday.
>>> This is my routine on weekdays.
Being busy makes me feel alive.
>>> CORRECT
I do nothing and take a rest on weekend as a reward.
>>> CORRECT
For these reasons, I prefer to live busily ONLY weekday. :-)
>>> For these reasons, I prefer to live busily ONLY on weekdays. :-)

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