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Oh, I almost forgot. Sorry for late. All people will need a topic to have conversation. If there is not any topic, perple often use their cellphone in front of friends, family. I don't like that. Using cellphone in front of a person looks like being indifferent for a counterpart. So when my friend is using cellphone in front of me, I often say, "Why are you looking for?". It's not polite behavior I think. Anyway, talk with me soon. Take care :) <Essay> Actually I don't want to be a teacher. However if I would be a teacher, I want to teach English maybe as you expected. My major is English, and it will help me teach students more easily. But I don't think I'm not supposed to teach English yet.

Hi there [이름]^^   I have always admired your honest opinions. I too have the same feeling like you when the company I have would keep looking at their cellphones at a time that we are supposed to be talking. I sometimes meet my friends in a \"no wifi\" area so they are forced to talk instead of looking down at their phones.hahahaha You have minimal corrections. Just be careful with spelling and the use of articles. Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrrections for you: Oh, I almost forgot. Sorry for late. >> Oh, I almost forgot. Sorry for late one.All people will need a topic to have conversation. >> All people will need a topic to have a conversation.  If there is not any topic, perple often use their cellphone in front of friends, family. I don\'t like that. >> If there isn\'t any topic, people often use their cellphones in front of friends, family. I don\'t like that. Using cellphone in front of a person looks like being indifferent for a counterpart. >> CORRECT Or> Using a cellphone in front of your company makes you look indifferent. So when my friend is using cellphone in front of me, I often say, \"Why are you looking for?\". >> So when my friend is using a cellphone in front of me, I often say, \"Why are you looking for?\".  It\'s not polite behavior I think. >> CORRECT Or> It\'s very impolite for me.Anyway, talk with me soon. >> CORRECT OR> Let\'s catch up soon.Take care :) >> CORRECT OR> Be careful.^^^<Essay>Actually I don\'t want to be a teacher. >> CORRECT OR> I\'d rather not be a teacher. However if I would be a teacher, I want to teach English maybe as you expected. >> CORRECT Or> If given a chance to be a teacher, I\'ll be an English teacher like you would expect me to be.  My major is English, and it will help me teach students more easily. >> CORRECT Or> My major is English so, that would help me in my teaching. But I don\'t think I\'m not supposed to teach English yet. >> But I dont think I\'m supposed to teach English yet.