Today's essay
학생이 쓴 원문
Forgiveness is not an occasional act, it is a constant attitude.
-Martin Luther King Jr.-
It's too difficult to forgive someone's mistake.
I have a friendly colleague at work.
She has a self-centered concern a little.
In my opinion, always I tried to understand her situation well.
But she doesn't know it.
Sometimes I want to do at my choice but I don't do that.
I'll do my best to maintaine our friendships.
I forgive her again today !
강사 첨삭
Hi Julie,
Thank you for sending this.
I really appreciate your honesty.
You are right. It\'s really hard to forgive someone who is always hurting you.
At the same time they are not aware of your effort.
But as a good person you chose to forgive that person.
Which is good.
Well I am going to see you in class.
Take care.
~Teacher Theresa
Forgiveness is not an occasional act, it is a constant attitude.-Martin Luther King Jr.-It\'s too difficult to forgive someone\'s mistake.>> Correct.
OR:
>> Forgiving someone\'s mistake is too difficult.I have a friendly colleague at work.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> I have a colleague who is friendly at work.She has a self-centered concern a little.
>> She is a self-centered but just a little.In my opinion, always I tried to understand her situation well.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> I tried to understand her situation every time.But she doesn\'t know it.
>> But she doesn\'t about know it.Sometimes I want to do at my choice but I don\'t do that.
>> Sometimes I want to do it as my choice but I don\'t do that.I\'ll do my best to maintaine our friendships.
>> I\'ll do my best to maintain our friendship.I forgive her again today !
>> Correct.
OR:
>> Today I also forgive her again.
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