Today's essay

2016-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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First of all, please don’t even think about it that I felt you are conscious about the time To be honest, I don’t mind. Anyway, today’s essay is about time, specifically ‘time saving’ I am always hurried of doing something, most of people including me, they are accustomed to saying “I’m busy or very busy whatever they do” The word ‘Busy’ is the most common describing word in the daily life all over the world. In my case, I am struggling to save time with the multi-tasking, (i.e. reading a newspaper while watching TV, driving a car while making a call with my English teacher, and searching information with smartphone while taking a walk) as many as I can Nowadays, there are huge information flying all over the world, we would know anything that happened to be in other area, even the place is the right opposite area. I’d like to suffice to say that how quickly to get information is the key for ‘time saving’ to do something you really want to need without rushing up yourself.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Michael! Happy Wednesday. ^^ Thank you so much for your concern. You are really one of the best students that I have. Please go over the corrections below. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me in class. See you tonight. Take care.Teacher Nina   First of all, please don’t even think about it that I felt you are conscious about the time >> First of all, please don\'t think that I felt you were conscious about the time. To be honest, I don’t mind. >> To be honest, I don\'t mind it. Anyway, today’s essay is about time, specifically ‘time saving’ >> Anyway, today\'s essay topic is about time, specifically \"saving time\". I am always hurried of doing something, most of people including me, they are accustomed to saying “I’m busy or very busy whatever they do” >> I am always in a hurry when doing something, most people including me are accustomed in the saying, \"I\'m busy or very busy in whatever I do\". The word ‘Busy’ is the most common describing word in the daily life all over the world. >> The word \"Busy\" is the most commond word to describe the daily life of people all over the world. In my case, I am struggling to save time with the multi-tasking, (i.e. reading a newspaper while watching TV, driving a car while making a call with my English teacher, and searching information with smartphone while taking a walk) as many as I can >> Did you mean: In my case, I am struggling in saving time like doing multi-tasking, (i.e. reading a newspaper while watching TV, driving a car while making a call with my English teacher, and searching information with my smartphone while taking a walk).Nowadays, there are huge information flying all over the world, we would know anything that happened to be in other area, even the place is the right opposite area. >> Did you mean: Nowadays, a lot of information are sent all over the world, we will be able to know anything that happened in another area, even the place is in the other side. I’d like to suffice to say that how quickly to get information is the key for ‘time saving’ to do something you really want to need without rushing up yourself. >> Did you mean:  I’d like to say that the way on how quickly we get information is the key to save time in doingsomething you really want or need without being in a hurry.

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