today's flight
학생이 쓴 원문
hi connie!
as you know, i'm poor at english
it is hard time for me to talk with you in english
but i like your class and i wanna enjoy your time
sometimes i cannot understand your speaking
and i have many story to talk to you but i cannot express in words
anyway, i think it's just a matter of time and my effort.
ok!
today, i start to fly at 7:20 pm and finish at 8:20pm
generally, i fly about 6 hours but today' flight is just i hour
it is very easy to me, but i will fly full time at tomorrow and
next tomorrow.
now, weather is very poor, it is cloudy, windy and cold
it is worst condition for flying
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Oh, I’m so glad to see your message posted on board. Actually you are not that poor in English. I know that you have the skill and we just have to polish it. It takes time. Let’s just be patient and work harder. I’m so excited about your job, I want to hear about it tonight.
Stay safe,
T. Connie
hi connie!as you know, i'm poor at English
>> As you know, I’m poor in English.it is hard time for me to talk with you in English
>> I’m having a hard time to talk to you in English.but i like your class and i wanna enjoy your time
>> But I like our class and I want to enjoy that time.sometimes i cannot understand your speaking>> Sometimes I can’t understand you.and i have many story to talk to you but i cannot express in words
>> I also have many stories to tell you but I can’t express in words.anyway, i think it's just a matter of time and my effort.
>> Anyway, I think it’s just a matter of time and effort.ok!today, i start to fly at 7:20 pm and finish at 8:20pm>> Today, I will start to fly at 7:20 and finishes at 8:20 PM.generally, i fly about 6 hours but today' flight is just i hour
>> Usually I fly about 6 hours but today’s flight is just 1 hour.it is very easy to me, but i will fly full time at tomorrow and next tomorrow.
>> It is very easy toe me, but I will fly full time tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.now, weather is very poor, it is cloudy, windy and cold >> Now, the weather is very poor, it’s cloudy, windy and cold.it is worst condition for flying
>> It is words weather for flying.
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