today's flight

2010-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

hi connie! as you know, i'm poor at english it is hard time for me to talk with you in english but i like your class and i wanna enjoy your time sometimes i cannot understand your speaking and i have many story to talk to you but i cannot express in words anyway, i think it's just a matter of time and my effort. ok! today, i start to fly at 7:20 pm and finish at 8:20pm generally, i fly about 6 hours but today' flight is just i hour it is very easy to me, but i will fly full time at tomorrow and next tomorrow. now, weather is very poor, it is cloudy, windy and cold it is worst condition for flying

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Oh, I’m so glad to see your message posted on board. Actually you are not that poor in English. I know that you have the skill and we just have to polish it. It takes time. Let’s just be patient and work harder. I’m so excited about your job, I want to hear about it tonight. Stay safe, T. Connie   hi connie!as you know, i'm poor at English >> As you know, I’m poor in English.it is hard time for me to talk with you in English >> I’m having a hard time to talk to you in English.but i like your class and i wanna enjoy your time >> But I like our class and I want to enjoy that time.sometimes i cannot understand your speaking>> Sometimes I can’t understand you.and i have many story to talk to you but i cannot express in words >> I also have many stories to tell you but I can’t express in words.anyway, i think it's just a matter of time and my effort. >> Anyway, I think it’s just a matter of time and effort.ok!today, i start to fly at 7:20 pm and finish at 8:20pm>> Today, I will start to fly at 7:20 and finishes at 8:20 PM.generally, i fly about 6 hours but today' flight is just i hour >> Usually I fly about 6 hours but today’s flight is just 1 hour.it is very easy to me, but i will fly full time at tomorrow and next tomorrow. >> It is very easy toe me, but I will fly full time tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.now, weather is very poor, it is cloudy, windy and cold >> Now, the weather is very poor, it’s cloudy, windy and cold.it is worst condition for flying >> It is words weather for flying.  

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