Today's homework - What is your greatest fear?

I often feel fear when i start to something new. For example, starting a new work or my boss request me to count the number of equipments left that are related to ski and snowboard in our office. Maybe i thinke not having many experiences in various jobs in many sphere is attributed to getting a feeling of nervous easily than usual. To do overcome it, i think that i should do many things as possible as i can forward. To put it more details, as i said before, I'm sure going to the Austraila and taking part in the Exchange Student Program will be helpful to me in that i can have more chances to me diverse people in other country. And there won't be anything to get without my own effort to get. So, these are the reason why i think its experieces is needed for me. lastly, have a nice weekend Alice and nice time with exciting shopping. While doing that, i will just be in my office with too many works. hahaha. it it joking, you know! see you later! teacher. i love you so much hahaha

Hello there! Thank you for this wonderful composition. It is indeed important to explore things around us if we want to change something in ourselves. I hope that you can find a lot of new things when you go to Australia. Here are the corrections I made for your sentences. See you later! -- Teacher Alice ^^ ----   I often feel fear when i start to something new. >>I often feel scared when I start something new. For example, starting a new work or my boss request me to count the number of equipments left that are related to ski and snowboard in our office. >>For example, starting a new work or when my boss requests me to count the number of equipment left that are releted to ski and snowboard in our office. Maybe i thinke not having many experiences in various jobs in many sphere is attributed to getting a feeling of nervous easily than usual. >>Maybe I think not havig many experiences in various jobs in many spheres is attributed to gettting nervous more easily than usual. To do overcome it, i think that i should do many things as possible as i can forward. >>To overcome it, I think that I should do as many things as possible as I go forward. To put it more details, as i said before, I\'m sure going to the Austraila and taking part in the Exchange Student Program will be helpful to me in that i can have more chances to me diverse people in other country. >>To put more details, as I said before, I\'m sure going to Australia and taking part in the Exchange Student Program will be helpful for me and that I can have more chances to be exposed to diverse people in another country. And there won\'t be anything to get without my own effort to get. >>Correct. So, these are the reason why i think its experieces is needed for me. >>So these are the reasons why I think I need experiences.lastly, have a nice weekend Alice and nice time with exciting shopping. >>Lastly, have a nice weekend Alice and have a nice and exciting shopping.While doing that, i will just be in my office with too many works. hahaha. >>Correct.it it joking, you know! >>It is just a joke, you know! see you later! teacher. >>Correct. i love you so much hahaha >>Correct.