today\\\'s homework

2021-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

What would you say is the cheapest way to get around your town or city? The cheapest way is just walking around. but I recommend you to ride a bike. I think my town is good for bicycles. because there is a bike road. So you can see many people riding bike.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]! 
To be honest I don\'t know how to ride a bicycle- HAHAHA. 
Probably I will never learn how to, but I would love to try. 
Thank you^^ 

The cheapest way is just walking around. but I recommend you to ride a bike.
>>> The cheapest way is to just walk around, but I recommend riding a bicycle.
I think my town is good for bicycles. because there is a bike road. So you can see many people riding bike.
>>> I think my neighborhood is a good place to ride a bicycle. Because there is a bicycle path, so you can see many people riding bicycles.

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