today\'s homework
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I prefer the beach to the swimming pool.
Because there are many things, that a sand, small fish, shells and so on.
My children like the beach, too.
I will go to the beach with my family in june for 1night and 2 days.
I\'m looking forward to the trip.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Kate!
Just do your best and you\'ll be great!
-Hanna ^^
I prefer the beach to the swimming pool.
>>I prefer the beach instead of the swimming pool.
Because there are many things, that a sand, small fish, shells and so on.
>>Because I can see a lot of things like the sand, small fishes, shells and many more.
My children like the beach, too.
>>My children like the beach too.
I will go to the beach with my family in june for 1night and 2 days.
>>I will go to the beach with my family on June for 1 night and 2 days.
I\'m looking forward to the trip.
>>Correct.
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