Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What is the best thing about your birth place?
My hometown is Busan, in Korea.
It is famous for East sea we called Donghea.
In this place, i can eat seafood such as sushi, Maeuntang, and aguijjim.
especially, There is seafood market, Jagalchi.
So, my birth place\'s best thing is seafood.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Lee. Wow, seafood! I don\'t have many chances to eat seafood since I live on top of a mountain. I\'ll definitely enjoy seafood to my heart and stomach\'s content if I ever get to visit Busan someday.
My hometown is Busan in Korea.
>>> correct
>>> OR: My hometown is in Busan, Korea.
It is famous for East sea we called Donghea.
>>> It is famous for East sea which we call Donghea.
>>> OR: It is famous for East sea which is called Donghea.
In this place, I can eat seafood such as sushi, Maeuntang, and aguijjim.
In this place, I can eat seafood such as sushi, Maeuntang, and aguijjim.
>>> correct
especially, There is seafood market, Jagalchi.
especially, There is seafood market, Jagalchi.
>>> Especially, there is a seafood market called Jagalchi.
So, my birth place\'s best thing is seafood.
>>> correct
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