Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What are the most important things your parents taught you?
My parents taught me many things.
The most important thing is that \'Do not lie\'.
They think that action which deceive other people is sins like 108 affliction.
So, i never tell lie other people.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Lee. That\'s good to know. Being an honest person will make you keep your dignity in life.
My parents taught me many things.
>>> correct
The most important thing is that \'Do not lie\'.
The most important thing is that \'Do not lie\'.
>>> The most important thing is \'Do not lie\'.
>>> OR: The most important thing is to not lie.
They think that action which deceive other people is sins like 108 affliction.
They think that action which deceive other people is sins like 108 affliction.
>>> They think that an action which deceives other people is a sin with 108 affliction.
So, i never tell lie other people.
>>> So, I never tell lies to other people.
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