Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> Do you agree that elementary students should also wear a uniform? Why or why not?
I agree with.
I think that it is good for children.
Wearing a uniform is same clothes.
That makes there no discrimination against income.
Therefore, elementary school students also think it is better to wear uniforms.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Lee. In addition, students don\'t need to spend time choosing and planning what to wear to school.
I agree with.
>>> I agree with it/this.
I think that it is good for children.
I think that it is good for children.
>>> correct
Wearing a uniform is same clothes.
Wearing a uniform is same clothes.
>>> Wearing a uniform is having the same clothes.
That makes there no discrimination against income.
That makes there no discrimination against income.
>>> That makes no discrimination on their family\'s income.
Therefore, elementary school students also think it is better to wear uniforms.
Therefore, elementary school students also think it is better to wear uniforms.
>>> correct
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