Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> Is there anything you need in your room/house? Where is the best place to buy furniture in your area?
I need laundry dryer.
when it rainy season, we can\'t dry our laundry.
So, I really want to get a dryer!
And the best place which is to buy furniture is my room.
My room is good for launching electronical something.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Lee. I need a dryer too.
I need laundry dryer.
>>> I need a laundry dryer.
when it rainy season, we can\'t dry our laundry.
>>> When it\'s the rainy season, we can\'t dry our laundry.
So, I really want to get a dryer!
>>> correct
And the best place which is to buy furniture is my room.
And the best place which is to buy furniture is my room.
>>> And the best place to buy furniture for is my room.
My room is good for launching electronical something.
>>> My room is good for furnishing with electronical something/appliances.
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