Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What are the things you have to do everyday?
I have to do exercise every morning because i am fat.
nowadays, i can\'t do exercise, but if it will be sunny day i have to go outside.
also, i have to study for computer programming and driver license.
I have been to study c++ and STL.
I am ready for practice test.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Lee. Studying hard is a necessity to succeed in life, but putting your health first is also a must. Good luck!
I have to do exercise every morning because i am fat.
>>> OR: I have to do exercise every morning because I have gained weight.
>>> OR: I have to do exercise every morning because I have put in a few pounds.
nowadays, i can\'t do exercise, but if it will be sunny day i have to go outside.
>>> Nowadays, I can\'t do exercise. But if it will be a sunny day, I would have to go outside.
Also, I have to study for computer programming and driver license.
>>> correct
I have been to study c++ and STL.
I have been to study c++ and STL.
>>> I have been studying c++ and STL.
I am ready for practice test.
>>> correct
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