Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> Why is good time management a necessary skill?
Because people who are better time management skill are more effecient.
Time management is the skill that can divide time and do today efficiently.
For example, There is a person who want playing guitar.
if they have a bad time management skill, i have to set aside time.
But, good time management skill make this problem more better.
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Thank you for this Lee!
Because people who are better time management skill are more effecient.
>>> Because people who are better with time management skill are more efficient.
Time management is the skill that can divide time and do today efficiently.
Time management is the skill that can divide time and do today efficiently.
>>> Time management is the skill where we can divide time and do things today efficiently.
For example, There is a person who want playing guitar.
For example, There is a person who want playing guitar.
>>> For example, there is a person who wants playing guitar.
if they have a bad time management skill, i have to set aside time.
if they have a bad time management skill, i have to set aside time.
>>> If they have a bad time management skill, they have to set aside time.
But, good time management skill make this problem more better.
>>> But, good time management skill makes this problem much better.
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