Today\'s homework

2023-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Homework ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.) > What are the things you have to do everyday? I have to eat meal every morning. if i don\'t eat breakfast, i am weak everyday. maybe, i fall down at school. so, i must eat breakfast. And i must also shower and exercise.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Lee. Breakfast is definitely the most important meal of the day.

I have to eat meal every morning.
>>> correct
>>> OR:   I must have breakfast every morning.
if i don\'t eat breakfast, i am weak everyday.
>>>   If I don\'t eat breakfast, I don\'t have the energy to last the day.
>>> OR: If I don\'t eat breakfast, I would be weak all throughout the day.
maybe, i fall down at school.
>>>  Maybe, I would faint in school.
>>> OR: I would probably faint in school.
So, I must eat breakfast.
>>> correct    
And i must also shower and exercise.
>>> I must also shower and exercise.  

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