Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer.
I will recomend online dating app because meeting at online world can give us many chance.
A good thing in online is that meet people who is other world. For example, i can talk america or canada in korean using tinder.
But there is bad things. one of the worst is to become componet of criminal. Twitter is messenger app that can meet and date too.
However, it is change toxical. It makes victims for sexual and chemical.
Especially, drug is very dangerous for kids.
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Thanks for doing your homework Lee! Keep writing what\'s on your mind!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I will recommend online dating app because meeting online world can give us many chances.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
A good thing in online is that meet people who is other world.
A good thing in online is that meet people who is other world.
>>> The advantage of social media is meeting people around the world.
For example, i can talk america or canada in korean using tinder.
>>> For example, I can talk with Americans or Canadians in Korea using tinder.
But there is bad things.
But there is bad things.
>>> But there are bad things.
OR>> However, there are also disadvantages.
one of the worst is to become componet of criminal.
>>> The worse is to become an asset of crime.
Twitter is messenger app that can meet and date too.
>>> Twitter is an app where people can meet and date.
However, it is change toxical.
However, it is change toxical.
>>> However, it is has changed to toxicity.
It makes victims for sexual and chemical.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Especially, drug is very dangerous for kids.
Especially, drug is very dangerous for kids.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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