Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Compared to the past, more people are now trying to learn a foreign language to increase their chances of landing a better job abroad. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I agree. i just think that we learn other languages because of better life.
However, I don\'t agree that we study hard for better job.
For example, I can study japan language for animation or movie.
And German language for soccer.
It is good for our life but, don\'t impact our jobs.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lee~!^^ This is your Monday morning reminder that you can handle whatever this week throws at you. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I agree.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
i just think that we learn other languages because of better life.
OR>>> I think we learn other languages for a better life.
However, I don\'t agree that we study hard for a better job.
However, I don\'t agree that we study hard for a better job.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
For example, I can study japan language for animation or movie.
For example, I can study japan language for animation or movie.
>>> For example, I can study Japanese for animation or movies.
And German language for soccer.
And German language for soccer.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It is good for our life but, don\'t impact our jobs.
It is good for our life but, don\'t impact our jobs.
>>> It is good for our life but, it doesn\'t have any impact to our jobs.
OR>>> It is good for our life but, it doesn\'t affect our jobs.
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