Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?
well, if i understand this question, there is a big fact that reducing gaps between rural areas and cities is impossible.
Because, there is a difference of population. if many people make many things.
For example, people\'s consumption make economical flow and this flow make other people.
Facilities are similar this example. more people are gethered, better facilities are in place.
I think cities aren\'t had any disadvantages.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lee! ^^ Thanks for relying on Power English to improve your skills. I see that you\'re always eager to keep your self on track. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Well, if I understand this question, there is a big fact that reducing the gap between rural areas and cities is impossible.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Because, there is a difference in population if many people make many things.
OR>>> Because there is a difference in population if many people come up with many ideas and things.
For example, people\'s consumption makes economical flow and this flow makes other people.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Facilities are similar this example. more people are gethered, better facilities are in place.
Facilities are similar this example. more people are gethered, better facilities are in place.
>>> Facilities are similar. For instance, more people are gathered in places which have better facilities.
I think cities aren\'t had any disadvantages.
I think cities aren\'t had any disadvantages.
>>> I think cities don\'t have any disadvantages.
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