Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: Some people believe that people behave differently when they wear different clothes, while others do not believe that clothes influence the way people behave. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Clothes don\'t effect people\'s behave. The factor that changes people\'s behave is thinking.
The reason that clothes are important is their mind is different.
But, it is very short. human forget its feeling.
So, people\'s clothes don\'t change recognize.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lee~!^^ Thank you for showing your enthusiasm in learning the English language. I appreciate your effort! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Clothes don\'t effect people\'s behave.
>>> Clothes don\'t affect people\'s behavior.
The factor that changes people\'s behave is thinking.
>>> The factor which changes people\'s behavior is their thought.
The reason that clothes are important is their mind is different.
The reason that clothes are important is their mind is different.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But, it is very short. human forget its feeling.
But, it is very short. human forget its feeling.
>>> But, if it is very short, humans forget their feelings.
So, people\'s clothes don\'t change recognize.
So, people\'s clothes don\'t change recognize.
>>> So, people\'s clothes don\'t change for recognition.
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