Today\'s homework
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ESSAY: Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
I don\'t agree this argument. Price is not most important thing to buy something.
Also Price is more important. But we can be fail if consider only cost of merchandise.
We have to think quality, local, maker, and other things.
We must consider every condition and choose efficient thing.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don\'t agree this argument.
>>> I don\'t agree with this argument.
Price is not most important thing to buy something.
>>> Price is not the most important thing when buying something.
Also Price is more important.
>>> Although price is important.
But we can be fail if consider only cost of merchandise.
>>> However, we can fail if we only consider the cost of the merchandise.
We have to think quality, local, maker, and other things.
We have to think quality, local, maker, and other things.
>>> We also have to think of quality, local, maker, and other things.
We must consider every condition and choose efficient thing.
We must consider every condition and choose efficient thing.
>>> We must consider every condition and choose efficiently.
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