Today\'s homework
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ESSAY: Movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Movies and dramas are one of the great ways to study history. But the story is not completely true. We exaggerated a lot to get our attention. There are even some people who don\'t actually have it.
Watching movies or dramas is a good way to learn history without getting bored. However, you should know that it is clearly wrong to recognize the whole truth of history with it.
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Movies and dramas are one of the great ways to study history.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But the story is not completely true.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
We exaggerated a lot to get our attention.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
There are even some people who don\'t actually have it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Watching movies or dramas is a good way to learn history without getting bored.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Watching movies or dramas is a good way to learn history without getting bored.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, you should know that it is clearly wrong to recognize the whole truth of history with it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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