Today\'s homework
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ESSAY: These days, older people who have retired often choose to spend money on themselves (for example on holidays) rather than save money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development?
I think it is a positive development.
It is very good behavior for parents to use money for their children, but I think it is wrong for them to use money for their children even when they are adults.
Of course, if your child is a college student, that can be an exception. However, I think investing money despite having a job ruins your child\'s money thinking.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think it is a positive development.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It is very good behavior for parents to use money for their children, but I think it is wrong for them to use money for their children even when they are adults.
It is very good behavior for parents to use money for their children, but I think it is wrong for them to use money for their children even when they are adults.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Of course, if your child is a college student, that can be an exception.
>>> Of course, if your child is a college student, it could be an exception.
However, I think investing money despite having a job ruins your child\'s money thinking.
>>> However, I think investing money despite having a job ruins your child\'s perception of money.
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