Today\'s homework
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Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.
Group activities are helpful for developing intellectual skills. It is certainly
For example, cording are almost group activities. When we make something using code, we share any section.
In each section we talk and debate about codes and then fix or be fixed other.
What is made throgh such activities has better performance than what is not.
In another side, it applies the same way.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Group activities are helpful for developing intellectual skills.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It is certainly.
>>> It is certain.
For example, cording are almost group activities.
For example, cording are almost group activities.
>>> For instance, coding is mostly a group activity.
When we make something using a code, we share the section.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
In each section we talk and debate about codes and then fix or be fixed by another.
In each section we talk and debate about codes and then fix or be fixed by another.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
What is made throgh such activities has better performance than what is not.
What is made throgh such activities has better performance than what is not.
>>> What is made through such activities could lead to a better performance than what is not.
On the other side, it applies the same way.
On the other side, it applies the same way.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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