Today\'s homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing Task: How do you spend your time when you are on holiday and the weather is bad?
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When the weather is bad, I spend most of my time at home. I play games, study, or watch movies. I usually watch animation or comedy movies, which help me overcome my depressive mood caused by rain
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Hello, [이름]do! I think, those are the best ways to brighten up oneself during a bad weather. And, I agree that there really is something in the rain that makes one more sentimental. I wish you will only have happy days!
-T. Sonny
When the weather is bad, I spend most of my time at home.
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OR. When the weather is bad, I usually stay home.
I play games, study, or watch movies.
>>CORRECT.
OR. Playing games, studying, or watching movies are some of the things I do.
I usually watch animation or comedy movies, which help me overcome my depressive mood caused by rain
>>I usually watch animation or comedy movies to help me overcome the depressing mood I feel caused by rain.
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