Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Do you think a computer can bring us happiness?
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Happiness is abstruct feeling. It means that emotions are different people by people.
I can feel happy for computer, but other people can\'t.
However, if it is something that many people feel, it can be considered universal.
Computers make people think a lot. There are more kinds of thoughts than you think, so you can feel sadness and joy. But I know enough that it makes many people happy.
If this idea is universal, it can be said that computers bring happiness.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mr, Lee!
We all have different interpretations of happiness based on our interests and personality. As you mentioned, you can be happy about computers while I am not. I just think of computers as a tool that makes my work easier.
Thank you for your homework!
T. Aki~
Happiness is abstruct feeling.
>>> Happiness is an abstract feeling.
It means that emotions are different people by people.
>>> It means that emotions vary from every person.
I can feel happy for computer, but other people can\'t.
>>> I can feel happy about computers, but other people can\'t.
However, if it is something that many people feel, it can be considered universal.
>>> CORRECT!
Computers make people think a lot.
>>> CORRECT!
There are more kinds of thoughts than you think, so you can feel sadness and joy.
>>> CORRECT!
But I know enough that it makes many people happy.
>>> CORRECT!
If this idea is universal, it can be said that computers bring happiness.
>>> CORRECT!
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