Today\'s homework
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HOMEWORK:
Do you think skin color can tell our body condition?
I think that\'s enough.
A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or having a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow.
This helps us to anticipate disease or predict fatigue, especially in newborns.
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Hi again, Mr. [Name]!
This is a very typical observation among newborns. and I am surprised that you who ar in the field of computers know about this. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Enjoy the rest of your day!
T. Aki~
I think that\'s enough.
>>> I think that\'s good enough to see some conditions in our body.
A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or having a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow.
>>> A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or have a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow.
This helps us to anticipate disease or predict fatigue, especially in newborns.
>>> CORRECT!
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