Today\'s homework
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HOMEWORK:
Do you know any interesting myths or stories about the weather?
It reminds me of Greek and Roman mythology.
The goddess of harvest and grain had a daughter, who was said to be really pretty.
It is said that the god of the underworld, who fell in love with it at a glance, kidnapped her and made her queen.
When her daughter disappeared, the goddess was in despair and did not take care of the grain, and the great drought lasted for a long time.
In the end, the God of Heaven went to the God of the Underworld and asked him to return her, but the daughter who ate the food of the Underworld was not able to go back.
The goddess, who returned for a while to the power of God in heaven but could not find her daughter completely, will take care of the grain on the day she returns and will not take care of the grain on the day she does not have a daughter.
I\'ve heard that it\'s the reason why summer and winter came about.
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It reminds me of Greek and Roman mythology.
>>> CORRECT!
The goddess of harvest and grain had a daughter, who was said to be really pretty.
>>> CORRECT!
It is said that the god of the underworld, who fell in love with it at a glance, kidnapped her and made her queen.
>>> CORRECT!
When her daughter disappeared, the goddess was in despair and did not take care of the grain, and the great drought lasted for a long time.
>>> CORRECT!
In the end, the God of Heaven went to the God of the Underworld and asked him to return her, but the daughter who ate the food of the Underworld was not able to go back.
>>> CORRECT!
The goddess, who returned for a while to the power of God in heaven but could not find her daughter completely, will take care of the grain on the day she returns and will not take care of the grain on the day she does not have a daughter.
>>> CORRECT!
I\'ve heard that it\'s the reason why summer and winter came about.
>>> CORRECT!
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