Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What do you like about your neighborhood?
The advantage of my neighborhood is that it is clean. Neighbors do not throw away trash, and cleaners clean the streets.
Also, it can be said that the fact that the neighbors are very static and polite is an advantage. They are quiet at night and regular in the morning.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! It really gives off a calm, cozy vibe. Living somewhere clean and respectful honestly makes such a big difference for your mood.
-T. Sonny
The advantage of my neighborhood is that it is clean.
>>Correct!
Neighbors do not throw away trash, and cleaners clean the streets.
>>Correct!
OR. Neighbors do not throw away trash, and cleaners regularly clean the streets.
Also, it can be said that the fact that the neighbors are very static and polite is an advantage.
Also, it can be said that the fact that the neighbors are very static and polite is an advantage.
>>Another advantage is that the neighbors are calm and polite.
They are quiet at night and regular in the morning.
>>They are quiet at night and follow regular routines in the morning.
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