Today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Which do you want? Neither.
2. The Mississippi river is the longest river in the United States.
3. Mary Smith is a member of the Republican Party.
4. Both Jane and Fred like Chinese food.
5. He was a veteran of World War II.
6. The British don't know much about the American Indians.
7. Bob said, "Let's play tennis tomorrow."
8. The president of the United States lives in the White House.
9. Let's go now. Now? Yes, now.
10. Has Mr. [Name] ever been to New York?
Hi Alice,
I had a birthday party of my coworker today in my office.
So we bought a cake, some snacks and drinks and sang "Happy Birthday" to him.
After he blew out all the candles on the cake, we had some foods together.
In Korea, it's rain now so I feel sentimental a little. Ha ha ha.
See you soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
WOW! Almost perfect for tonight\'s homework! That was awesome! :)
Oh, it\'s raining in here too. It feels like it won\'t stop anymore. Aargh.
I think you feel sentimental today because it\'s gloomy and sad when it rains. ^^
See you later, [이름]! :)
~Teacher Alice
1. Which do you want? Neither.
>> Correct!2. The Mississippi river is the longest river in the United States.
>> The Mississippi River is the longest river in the United States. 3. Mary Smith is a member of the Republican Party.
>> Correct!4. Both Jane and Fred like Chinese food.
>> Correct!5. He was a veteran of World War II.
>> Correct!6. The British don\'t know much about the American Indians.
>> Correct!7. Bob said, \"Let\'s play tennis tomorrow.\"
>> Correct!8. The president of the United States lives in the White House.
>> Correct!9. Let\'s go now. Now? Yes, now.
>> Correct!10. Has Mr. [Name] ever been to New York?
>> Correct!Hi Alice,
>> Correct!I had a birthday party of my coworker today in my office.
>> We had a birthday party for my co-worker today in our office.
>> OR My co-worker had his birthday party in the office today.So we bought a cake, some snacks and drinks and sang \"Happy Birthday\" to him.
>> Correct!After he blew out all the candles on the cake, we had some foods together.
>> Correct!
>> OR After blowing out all the candles on the cake, we had shared foods together.In Korea, it\'s rain now so I feel sentimental a little. Ha ha ha.
>> In Korea, it\'s raining now so I feel a little sentimental. Ha ha ha. *Cute :) me too.
>> It\'s raining now in Korea so I feel a little sentimental.See you soon.
>> Correct!
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