Today's homework

2012-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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My mom encourages me everyday. When I moved to new house, I abandoned clothes a lot. The boys, be ambitious!!!!!!!!! I have enthusiasm that is getting a job in UN I can obtain knowledge in a school.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Wow! You made your homework today, I guess you\'re not busy. :) Anyway, please be guided with the corrections I made for you below. Have a wonderful day!           My mom encourages me everyday. >>CORRECT!When I moved to new house, I abandoned clothes a lot.>>When I moved to a new house, I abandoned a lot of clothes. The boys, be ambitious!!!!!!!!! >>The boys are ambitious.I have enthusiasm that is getting a job in UN >>I have an enthusiasm in getting a job in UN.I can obtain knowledge in a school. >>CORRECT!  

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