Today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My mom encourages me everyday.
When I moved to new house, I abandoned clothes a lot.
The boys, be ambitious!!!!!!!!!
I have enthusiasm that is getting a job in UN
I can obtain knowledge in a school.
강사 첨삭
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My mom encourages me everyday.
>>CORRECT!When I moved to new house, I abandoned clothes a lot.>>When I moved to a new house, I abandoned a lot of clothes.
The boys, be ambitious!!!!!!!!!
>>The boys are ambitious.I have enthusiasm that is getting a job in UN
>>I have an enthusiasm in getting a job in UN.I can obtain knowledge in a school.
>>CORRECT!
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