Today's homework

2012-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi,Jennifer. It's sunny day, isn't it? My son is getting better today. But I may not go to see a moveie because I have to look after him. Have a nice day! See you. I matched the verbs with their oppisites and made sentences using them. 1. accept- refuse They accepted all my suggestions. He refused to go to see a doctor. 2. allow- prohibit It's not allowed to enter with dogs. As you know, cheating is prohibited in the exam. 3. attack- defend The Syrian rebel attacked the regular army of the government. 4. be born- die King sejong was born in 1397 and became the forth king of Josoen Dynasty and died in 1450 remaining countless achievement. 5. bend- straighten Bend your amrs and straingten them. 6. buy-sell I wanted to buy the bag, but it's already sold out. 7. build-destroy The Romans bulit many histofical inheritences but Rome was destroyed because of Romans self importance and corruption. 8. come- go

강사 첨삭

This is great!

You got a perfect score in your homework.

You even formed superb sentences.

I knew all along that you got it in you.

You have all the potentials to become more acquainted with the English language.

There is no doubt that you will master it in no time.

Take care!

_T.Jennifer^^

Hi,Jennifer.

>> Correct

It\'s sunny day, isn\'t it?

>> It\'s a sunny day, isn\'t it?
My son is getting better today.

>> Correct

But I may not go to see a moveie because I have to look after him.

>> But I may not go to see a movie because I have to look after him. [just a tupographical error - moveie]

Have a nice day! See you.
>> Correct
I matched the verbs with their oppisites and made sentences using them.

>> I matched the verbs with their opposites and made sentences using them.
1. accept- refuse

>> Correct
They accepted all my suggestions.

>> Correct

He refused to go to see a doctor.

>> He refused to see a doctor.

>> He refused to go to the doctor.
2. allow- prohibit

>> Correct
It\'s not allowed to enter with dogs.

>> Correct

As you know, cheating is prohibited in the exam.

>> As you know, cheating is prohibited when taking an exam.
3. attack- defend

>> Correct
The Syrian rebel attacked the regular army of the government.

>> Correct
4. be born- die

>> Correct
King sejong was born in 1397 and became the forth king of Josoen Dynasty and died in 1450 remaining countless achievement.
>> King Sejong was born in 1397 and he became the fourth king of Joseon Dynasty.

He died in 1450, leaving his countless achievements.
5. bend- straighten

>> Correct
Bend your amrs and straingten them.
>> Correct

OR >> Bend your arms and straighten them again.
6. buy-sell

>> Correct
I wanted to buy the bag, but it\'s already sold out.
>> Correct

7. build-destroy

>> Correct
The Romans bulit many histofical inheritences but Rome was destroyed because of Romans self importance and corruption.
>> The Romans built many heritages but Rome was destroyed because of Romans\' selfishness and corruption.
8. come- go

>> Correct

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